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Beautiful Disaster (The Bet)

Beautiful Disaster - Francette Phal Uh, really? This should be named "How many teenagers can get knocked up in one book".I read through this one fairly quickly and even though I was warned about the editing errors, that warning didn't prepare me for what I found.This read like a rough draft: grammar errors, spelling errors and so on. Please, please, please edit this book!!Let's start with the narrating... Quite a few times I questioned my intelligence because I was lost as to what was happening, why it was happening and what person was telling it. Coupled with the terrible editing there were many places when it wasn't clear anymore about whom the narrator was talking. - or maybe I do suffer from a low IQ after all.The characters, ah well. I cold quite easily rename them all from stupid 1 to stupid 10. Because that's all I felt for these characters. Whores, drug addicts, backstabbers and even a psychic (right there I seriously lost my shit, luckily it was towards the end of the book).So despite all the mistakes and errors, I read through it very quickly, some places had me even curious but I also might've caught brain damage from rolling my eyes to hard and I definitely won't be reading the second installment.Read this at your own risk.